First, I think you've done a good job. I really like your " Who Else Wants To Discover The Secrets..." headline. A who else headline is proven...
I would use the headline " How To Make $247.91 A Day... " for 2 reasons. One, it sounds believable and two everyone always wants to know " How...
How are you at copywriting? Since this is the copywriting forum and all.
I wrote a Direct Mail letter for a $497 set of stainless steel pots and pans. Or, as the company called it, Executive Cookware. The letter...
The advice that Paul gave you is very smart and very valuable. It will give you an education in copywriting more than you will ever know. It...
Yes! This is the place to ask. Remember: A.I.D.A, for your sales letter. Attention, Interest, Desire, Action. The Attention would be your...
Mitchell k Friedlander. You've never heard of him but he's made hundreds of millions for the company he writes copy for.
Okay, I'm going to bring myself down to your level for about 6 minutes. That little STICKY thing that was at the top of the Copywriting forum...
Huh, I can feel your pain. I've wrote some fair size Direct Mail pieces...copywriting... not articles. And I've only got a tiny portion of the...
Oh, also I know two guys. Vinny and Rocko... They can be real persuasive, glad to hear it worked out.
Here is what you do: Go to google, type in the following.... How can I sell my prewritten articles on Health niche? Than answers...
Yes, I've had experience writing in the Insurance industry. Sales Messages and Direct Mail. If your looking for articles I'm not your guy.
The headline is pretty good. The subhead isn't bad but it needs to be shorter. What they were trying to go for was Problem Agitate Solution....
Separate names with a comma.