why have you put "Welcome to CarHD.net" do you think people will click off if you don't welcome them? They're interested in car wallpapers, and...
You have 3 seconds to capture your traffic. If they're not interested or don't understand in that short space of time you have lost them. Perhaps...
You've had to explain what the website is about before letting reviewers see the site. The reason is, it is not obvious once you get on the site....
Says Free HD Wallpapers but its quite small, would have that a lot larger so its obvious what the site is about.
Looks neat, tidy and professional
Sorry, just don't understand what the site is. what ever it is just looks bland.
Looks fine mate to me. Got to laugh at some of the comments people make. The info is enough to sign-up, I doubt anyone would have second...
Great, those pictures show how much of an expert you are!! How did you get the Haynes Manual job? People love stories and everyone knows about...
Absolutely, it positions you as a reliable expert!!!
Great photo but instead you need to use that space to tell prospective customers why they should use you and nobody else. You do home repairs,...
When the shop loaded the first thing I saw was 'top 10 halloween products'. Bear in mind that some hits stay on a page for 0.3 seconds, if that is...
Just write as if you were talking to one person. simples!!
Your paragliding school page should be the home page.
Like most sites, talk about themselves. Those that hit your site want to know what they get, not hear all about you. For example "ultimate...
This website lacks everything to do with sales copy. How many lists did you buy?
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