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Recent Content by Emily Cleaver

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    What Makes You Different?

    I have quite a bit of experience which I think makes me different from a lot of web writers. For example, I was a successful freelance researcher...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Oct 28, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    Can You Help Me Improve My Sales Page?

    It’s certainly a lot clearer than it was before. I would make the text at the top of the page a lot smaller. Huge shouty text in black and red...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Oct 21, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    Hey Gang, Rate my copy

    I would say it was much too long. I read a few paragraphs, then scrolled down to see how much more there was, and I was immediately put off by the...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Oct 7, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    Feedback

    There are lots of grammatical errors in it. I wouldn't say it was written well, no. I've seen a lot worse, but it certainly doesn't read like a...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Sep 2, 2008 in forum: Reviews
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    Do you like my copy?

    I've read the whole thing (well, scan-read the whole thing, which is what anyone visiting your site would do), but I still have no clear idea of...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Sep 1, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    What's a good FTP client that's free?

    I like FileZilla. Always does the job for me.
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 27, 2008 in forum: General Chat
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    Critique my blog

    A light background with dark text, with as high a contrast between the two as possible. (ie. The highest contrast would be black on white, which...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 24, 2008 in forum: Reviews
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    Critique my blog

    I hate reading white text on a black background. You should make it as easy as possible to read, especially as it's a blog!
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 24, 2008 in forum: Reviews
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    Please Review My Ebay Store RAW HOG

    In FF and IE there are white spaces to the right and left of the banner. They're images called bgbody.jpg. My screen is 1280 x 800 pixels. Editing...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 24, 2008 in forum: Reviews
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    please review my dating site

    "Get your partner you deserve" doesn't make sense. "Get the partner you deserve", or "Find the partner you deserve" is correct.
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 24, 2008 in forum: Reviews
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    Review My Site .. Thanks!

    I like the bright colours and design, makes it stand out from other sites. But the copy could be made much shorter and snappier to make it easier...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 24, 2008 in forum: Reviews
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    Critique my sales copy

    To be honest, there are lots of mistakes in your copy. I had a spare 5 minutes so I've done a version with corrected grammar. (Well, hopefully...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 23, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    English as a second language - I would appreciate some help

    What kind of publications are you reading? I know some non-English speakers who say that reading a range of English language newspapers is the...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 18, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    English as a second language - I would appreciate some help

    Like you say, there's not much technically wrong with the English in your first example, it’s just that the writer has improved the style and...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 18, 2008 in forum: Copywriting
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    Best way getting English writing feedback?

    I may have misunderstood what you meant there (you may know this), but living and leaving are pronounced differently - living is a short vowel...
    Post by: Emily Cleaver, Aug 16, 2008 in forum: Copywriting